The Creature Inside — Context and Discussion
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They said it was urgent."
Burgess paused, lighted a cigarette, then belatedly offered one to Jerry, who declined. "Well," he said, interspersing his words with short nervous puffs of smoke, "about a year ago, I stumbled on a way to reverse the process of an electro-encephalograph, to play pre-recorded thoughts and experiences to a man's mind. You zoologists, with your Contact process for penetrating newly discovered fauna's minds, will be familiar with the process. Luckily for us."
Jerry eyed him. "Go on."
"My development involves an infinitely selective feedback. We give the subject a saturating dose of inflowing concepts. His mind is free to choose among them and to link them. Take 'bigness, affluence and danger' for an instance. The subject puts them together and fleshes them out. He could experience a large, expensive fission bomb falling onto him, or he could be sacrificed to an immense golden idol, or--Or anything that his inner mind chose."
"I begin to understand," said Jerry. "The overlay influences all the senses. The subject thinks he's _really_ undergoing whatever he conjures up--and you use it for therapy, letting him work off his aggressions and frustrations in what seems to him an actual universe."
"Correct, except for the tense," said Alan Burgess. "I _was_ doing that until Monday of this week." He leaned forward across the desk. "We screen the subjects carefully, because certain psychoses could be disastrous to the subject in my device. Paranoia, for instance. The man would be amid unutterable horrors, with danger on every side; he'd emerge a gibbering idiot, if he didn't die of heart failure first."
"Emerge?" asked Jerry, frowning. "I'd assumed you used a helmet, such as we do in Contact...."
Burgess sighed. "Unfortunately, I am paying the penalty of lone-wolf experimentation. I wish I'd had the sense to route the input to the brain through a helmet, but I didn't. Instead I installed the person in an observation room. The influencing factor was nutrition. Intravenous feedings wouldn't have served the purpose of the observer; sometimes the subject's choice of foodstuffs is significant. He had to be let move about, his mind in a make-believe world, but his body actually moving about a room we could see into. So--I had an atomic duplicator installed. The hospital got one last year for making radium, turning cancerous growths into normal flesh, regrowing bone and the like.
"Should the subject then grow hungry, the duplicator would be triggered by his conviction of eating. In his mind, he might be--hanging from a branch by his tail, for instance. The duplicator's production of bananas, coconuts or whatever would give us a further clue to his state of mind. You see?"
"So far, sound enough, Dr. Burgess," said Jerry. "So what went wrong? I assume something did, or I wouldn't be here."
"We made a terrible error. We tried observing a man named Anthony Mawson in our gadget. I'd diagnosed his case as simple inferiority complex. My fault. Wrong diagnosis. Mawson has megalomania, a gorgeous case of it ... of course, he's not the first such case to fool psychiatrists. You see, his outward shyness, soft-spoken voice and general gawkishness is due to feeling superior to others, not the reverse. He feels smarter, stronger, braver, etcetera, than everybody else in creation--but he also feels that nobody knows it but himself. Hence his indrawing, his brooding, taciturn gentility."
Jerry Norcriss prodded. "What happened with Mawson when you put him in your machine?"
"I don't know," said Burgess. "No one's been able to see into the machine since he entered it on Monday."
"He couldn't have escaped?"
"No! I wish he had. Anthony Mawson is still in that room, in his own private universe, and we can't get him out of it. We've tried cutting the power to the machine; the opacity inside the room remains. We sent two men in after him. They never came out."
"How could he possibly?" asked Jerry.
Burgess shook his head. "We can only guess. Our theory is that he's used the duplicator to make the entire room self-sustaining. Normally we could wait till he runs out of material to feed the duplicator, but--we can't wait on the lives of those two men. Nor can we chance his expanding his universe."
Norcriss frowned. "Expanding it?"
The story opens with a terse exchange between Lieutenant Jerry Norcriss and Dr. Alan Burgess, who reveals a device that projects a subject's subconscious into a tangible universe via an atomic duplicator. The setup is clinical: a hospital room, a gray field on the wall, and a patient named Mawson who has become trapped inside his own paranoid creation. Burgess's explanation is laced with nervous puffs of smoke, contrasting with Norcriss's measured responses. The device's flaw—no helmet, just a room—means the subject's body moves in the real world while his mind inhabits a fabricated one. This physical vulnerability becomes the story's central tension.
The Duplicator as a Trap
The atomic duplicator is not merely a plot device; it is the hinge on which the story's logic turns. Burgess explains that it was intended to provide nutrition and objects based on the subject's beliefs, but in Mawson's hands, it becomes a weapon. The duplicator can 'make anything he decides he needs,' as Norcriss warns, potentially allowing Mawson to block the entrance. This transforms a therapeutic tool into a prison. The story's tension arises from the fact that the duplicator responds to conviction, not reality—Mawson's paranoid universe is as solid as the hospital corridor, and the boundary between them is a permeable gray field.
Subconscious Leaks and Unreliable Perception
Norcriss's first foray into Mawson's universe reveals that his own subconscious shapes the experience. Burgess notes that Norcriss's visions of a woman named Carol come 'straight from your subconscious,' and that 'a subconscious just doesn't know how to lie.' This introduces a layer of psychological unreliability: the protagonist cannot trust his senses, because the environment is co-authored by his own mind. The story uses this to blur the line between therapy and danger. When Norcriss later hesitates at the elevator, noticing the attendant's 'strange outfit,' the reader is left uncertain whether this is a real detail or another projection—a subtle echo of the device's influence.
The Ethics of Lone-Wolf Experimentation
Burgess admits he is 'paying the penalty of lone-wolf experimentation,' having bypassed safety protocols like a helmet. His device was built without oversight, and the consequences are dire: a patient is lost in a self-generated hell, and the only trained operator is too shaken to continue. The story raises questions about responsibility and risk. Burgess's medical judgment is conflicted—he refuses to send Norcriss back immediately, yet has no alternative plan. The hospital corridor becomes a waiting room for a potential catastrophe. Norcriss's final decision to walk away, despite his impulse to re-enter, underscores the ethical weight of the situation: sometimes the most courageous act is to acknowledge one's limits.
Readers should pay close attention to the story's use of physical details—the gray field, the elevator boy's uniform, the cigarette smoke—as markers of reality. The narrative deliberately withholds certainty, forcing the reader to question what is real and what is projected. Norcriss's internal struggle between duty and self-preservation mirrors the device's central paradox: the mind creates its own prison, but the body must choose whether to enter.
Years of shelving have shown me how often paranoia whispers through one volume and finds its echo in another. In The Creature Inside, Norcriss learns how dangerously real a delusion can become. I found that same uneasy truth resting quietly within The Men of Boru — Reading Notes, though its voice is gentler, more resigned. They sit together now, sharing a secret about the worlds we build.
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