Shango — Edition Insights
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Koven said he would, and Bruschloss made a quick exit. He seemed to do things in opposites. First he had been straining to remain and keep conversation alive. Last, he had been straining to leave as rapidly as possible. In spite of the man's slovenly appearance, Koven knew he had a dangerous enemy. Bruschloss would have had to be an utter moron to believe that Koven had come to Maru simply to aid Spotwood. Spotwood himself, as if sensing Koven's appraisal of the man from the Betelgeuse Bloc, spoke:
"Watch him. He's got three uglies up at his place who do nothing all day but drink and play cards. They're here in case of trouble."
Koven smiled thinly. "I hope we can accommodate them."
Toward the end of the sixteen-hour-day, after Spotwood had prepared dinner from food cubes, Koven decided to take a stroll around the village. The citizens hardly gave him a glance, engrossed in eating within their houses. From glimpses Koven caught, they hardly looked like a warlike crew, and yet he had read the tales of atrocities committed across the strait on South, and he felt a crawly sensation on his spine. Tonight, perhaps, plans would be laid for the next attack, while he knew nothing about the process which would probably go on right around him. Certainly the people of Valaya weren't 'paths. He knew that much.
Koven crossed the central clearing and turned left toward the village fringe. He passed the final few dwellings and turned left again, up a slight wooded rise, back across which he could reach Spotwood's house. As he crossed the spine of the ridge, he thought he noticed a movement along to his right, and turned in that direction. He caught sight of an arm arching forward, and a small circular object spiraling down toward his head through the spicy air. Instinctively trained, Koven pumped his legs and slid out forward along the ground, rolling, watching the object go spinning crazily by against the darkening heavens. He extended an arm, caught a tree and jerked himself around into the protection of its thick trunk as a flat explosion tore the air and smashed his eardrums. He closed his eyes tightly. The blazing white flash lasted only a second.
Struggling up, he had time only to see the scooped-out pit along the spine's crest, smoking like a raw wound, where the bomb had struck. Boots bit earth, coming in his direction at a dead run. Koven crouched in tree shadow, hoping that his adversary had not seen him scramble to safety in the illusive light on the hill. He snaked the flat pistol free of its casing just as the attacker broke through a clump of brush. Koven had a fleeting impression of massive size, a meaty face and short spiky dark hair. Then he was on his feet, charging against his enemy, who abruptly saw him and ground to a halt.
The attacker's mouth made a red startled O, and one heavy hand labored to bring up a heavy pistol. But Koven had already fired. The pale thin beam lanced out in complete silence. The enemy dropped his weapon but had no time to utter a sound. The skin of his head began to blacken and fall away in charring strips. Koven always felt relieved when a man shot like that fell, for he did not have to look at the bubbling horror of burning flesh and gristle.
Swinging around, Koven scrutinized the village. No clamor, no outcry had been made. The central street overflowed now, for the short night had nearly begun, and torches began to flare, throwing up great roiling shadows on the trees as the crowd babbled and pressed down to the main clearing.
Why in the name of sense had the attack come now? at this precise moment? Spotwood had been in Maru for months, and had said nothing about any sort of attack on him. Certainly Bruschloss suspected Spotwood. All men from Earth had to be suspect here, to a man from the Betelgeuse Bloc. Therefore something about himself which, offhand, he couldn't pinpoint, had driven The Hog far enough into fear to send this attacker.
This point Spotwood verified after Koven jogged back to the house at a run. Spotwood scratched his chin and whistled. "Why the blazes is he after you right away?" Spotwood asked.
"I'm wondering the same."
"He must think you've found out how he organizes the raids."
"That's the hell of it. I haven't."
John Jakes' 1956 story "Shango" opens with a briefing in a room lined with star maps, where chief Van Isaac points to a violet dot on a thin yellow line—the planet Valaya. The setting immediately establishes a colonial framework: Valaya was "peopled largely by residents of the Caribbean" and left "rather backward—by choice of the colonists." The investigator, Arnold Koven, is dispatched to stop a man named Bruschloss, a Betelgeuse Bloc citizen suspected of fomenting tribal raids. The excerpts reveal a narrative built on layers of communication—official briefings, surveillance gaps, and a native dance that carries hidden meanings.
Colonial Structures and Surveillance Gaps
The catalog subjects list "Space colonies -- Fiction" and "Communication -- Fiction," but the excerpts show a more specific dynamic: a colonial administration that cannot monitor its own subjects. Van Isaac explains that the local ruler "has in no way communicated with any of the other tribes"—yet the attacks are coordinated. The G.C.I.A. agent Spotwood "couldn't plant cameras or sound equipment" due to a code forbidding it. This gap in surveillance is the story's engine. The colonists' own rules prevent them from seeing what the natives are doing, forcing Koven to rely on indirect methods. The narrative thus critiques the limits of technological oversight, a theme that emerges from the text rather than the catalog headings.
The Dance as a Communication System
The story's central device is a dance that conveys tactical information. Koven forces the dancer Chemin to demonstrate: "She crossed her wrists and moved her fingers in a fluttering motion" for a peninsula, then another gesture for a meeting place. The dance is not mere ritual but a precise language, one that the colonial authorities had dismissed. When Chemin performs the new message, the ruler "uttered a sharp gasp and lurched up from his woven chair as he read the new message." The dance bypasses the surveillance that monitors drums and runners. Jakes builds the climax around this embodied communication, contrasting it with the high-tech star maps and projection lanterns of the opening. The excerpts do not reveal how Koven learned to interpret the dance, but they show its lethal effectiveness.
A Book as the Key to Interpretation
Near the story's end, Spotwood asks Koven how he understood the dance. Koven points to a book on the table: "The arts no longer convey meaning, but the ruler of Maru managed to put it back in. Something you didn't look for. Something I wouldn't have looked for ... if I hadn't stopped at a Vendobook." This moment ties the narrative to the catalog subject "Communication -- Fiction" in an unexpected way. The solution is not a gadget but a book—a physical object in a science-fiction setting. The excerpts do not name the book or its contents, but the implication is that it provided a framework for reading symbolic gestures. This detail grounds the story in a specific, low-tech solution, subverting the expectation that advanced problems require advanced tools.
The excerpts from "Shango" offer a self-contained episode that rewards attention to its layered communication systems. Readers may note how the colonial setting shapes every interaction, from the briefing room to the dance circle. The story's brevity—under 7,000 words—means that each scene carries weight. Pay particular attention to the moments when characters misinterpret or overlook information, as these gaps drive the plot. The ending, with Koven at a communicator calling for Control squads, leaves the aftermath ambiguous, inviting reflection on whether the colonial order has truly been restored or merely reinforced.
That rainy afternoon, I kept thinking about how Jakes made a dance a code—how the primitive became the cleverest communication. It stayed with me, that idea, until I found myself reaching for something nearby, Operation Boomerang — Themes and Context, almost without deciding to. The rain kept falling; the pages turned themselves.
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