The Spicy Sound of Success — Key Ideas to Explore

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Harmon, Jim, 1933-2010, Francis, Dick [Illustrator] Project Gutenberg 2016 Not confirmed
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Reading time 38 min
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Jim Harmon's 1959 short story uses sensory confusion—taste, sound, and sight—to depict a space crew's struggle with a planet that alters perception. The narrative shifts between skeptical captain Gavin and experienced spaceman Quade, whose conflicting interpretations drive a tense, surreal exploration.
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Now was the captain's chance to prove he knew less than the crew--all their lives hung upon it!

There was nothing showing on the video screen. That was why we were looking at it so analytically.

"Transphasia, that's what it is," Ordinary Spaceman Quade stated with a definite thrust of his angular jaw in my direction. "You can take my word on that, Captain Gavin."

"Can't," I told him. "I can't trust your opinion. I can't trust _anything_. That's why I'm Captain."

"You'll get over feeling like that."

"I know. Then I'll become First Officer."

"But look at that screen, sir," Quade said with an emphatic swing of his scarred arm. "I've seen blank scanning like that before and you haven't--it's your first trip. This always means transphasia--cortex dissolution, motor area feedback, the Aitchell Effect--call it anything you like, it's still transphasia."

"I know what transphasia is," I said moderately. "It means an electrogravitational disturbance of incoming sense data, rechanneling it to the wrong receptive areas. Besides the human brain, it also effects electronic equipment, like radar and television."

"Obviously." Quade glanced disgustedly at the screen.

"Too obvious. This time it might not be a familiar condition of many planetary gravitational fields. On this planet, that blank kinescope may mean our Big Brother kites were knocked down by hostile natives."

"You are plain wrong, Captain. Traditionally, alien races never interfere with our explorations. Generally, they are so alien to us they can't even recognize our existence."

I drew myself up to my full height--and noticed in irritation it was still an inch less than Quade's. "I don't understand you men. Look at yourself, Quade. You've been busted to Ordinary Spaceman for just that kind of thinking, for relying on tradition, on things that have worked before. Not only your thinking is slipshod, you've grown careless about everything else, even your own life."

"Just a minute, Captain. I've never been 'busted.' In the Exploration Service, we regard Ordinary Spaceman as our highest rank. With my hazard pay, I get more hard cash than _you_ do, and I'm closer to retirement."

"That's a shallow excuse for complacency."

"Complacency! I've seen ten thousand wonders in twenty years of space, with a million variations. But the patterns repeat themselves. We learn to know what to expect, so maybe we can't maintain the reactionary caution the service likes in officers."

"I resent the word 'reactionary,' Spaceman! In civilian life, I was a lapidary and I learned the value of deliberation. But I never got too cataleptic to tap a million-dollar gem, which is more than my contemporaries can say, many of 'em."

"Captain Gavin," Quade said patiently, "you must realize that an outsider like you, among a crew of skilled spacemen, can never be more than a figurehead."

Was this the way I was to be treated? Why, this man had deliberately insulted me, his captain. I controlled myself, remembering the familiarity that had always existed between members of a crew working under close conditions, from the time of the ancient submarines and the first orbital ships.

"Quade," I said, "there's only one way for us to find out which of us is right about the cause of our scanning blackout."

"We go out and find the reason."

"Exactly. We go. You and me. I hope you can stand my company."

"I'm not sure I can," he answered reluctantly. "My hazard pay doesn't cover exploring with rookies. With all due respect, Captain."

I clapped him on the shoulder. "But, man, you have just been telling me all we had to worry about was common transphasia. A man with your experience could protect himself and cover even a rookie, under such familiar conditions--right?"

"Yes, sir, I suppose I could," Quade said, bitterly aware he had lost out somewhere and hoping that it wasn't the start of a trend.

"Looks okay to me," I said. Quade passed a gauntlet over his faceplate. "It's real. I can blur it with a smudged visor. When it blurs, it's solid."

The landscape beyond the black corona left by our landing rockets was unimpressive. The rocky desert was made up of silicon and iron oxide, so it looked much the same as a terrestrial location. Yellowish-white sand ran up to and around reddish brown rock clawing into the pink sunlight.

"I don't understand it," Quade admitted. "Transphasia hits you a foul as soon as you let it into the airlock."

"Apparently, Quade, _this_ thing is going to creep up on us."

"Don't sound smug, Captain. It's pitty-pattying behind you too."

The keening call across the surface of consciousness postponed my reply.

The wail was ominously forlorn, defiant of description. I turned my head around slowly inside my helmet, not even sure that I had heard it.

The story opens with a dispute over a blank video screen. Ordinary Spaceman Quade diagnoses “transphasia,” a gravitational disturbance that scrambles sensory data, but Captain Gavin resists the explanation, insisting that the blank screen could mean hostile natives. This argument establishes the central tension: experience versus caution, pattern recognition versus deliberate skepticism. The dialogue is sharp, with Quade’s scarred arm and angular jaw contrasting Gavin’s lapidary background and insistence on deliberation. The voice is colloquial yet precise, using terms like “cortex dissolution” and “Aitchell Effect” to ground the speculative premise.

Sensory Overload and Unreliable Narration

The narrative voice shifts dramatically once the crew leaves the ship. The landscape is described as “rich chocolate ice cream smothered with chocolate syrup, caramel, peanuts and maple syrup,” and footsteps appear as “faint traces of whipped cream.” This synesthetic language—taste and smell replacing sight—reflects the transphasia affecting perception. The captain drinks wine from his tube to “sharpen” his taste, which paradoxically makes the landscape more vivid but also more surreal. The reader is never sure whether the descriptions are literal or hallucinatory. The text explicitly states that “things wavered for me during a wisp of time,” and the crew’s safety line is described as giving them “a larger hunk of reality to hold onto.” This instability is reinforced by the audio cues: a Sousa march blasts inside helmets to drown out “something dark and ominous,” and later a basso profundo singing Figaro climbs to a “girlish shriek.” The narrative refuses to settle on a single sensory register, keeping the reader off-balance.

Voice and Authority in Dialogue

The story’s pace is largely driven by the back-and-forth between Gavin and Quade. Their exchanges are rapid and laced with sarcasm. When Quade says, “You’ll get over feeling like that,” Gavin replies, “I know. Then I’ll become First Officer.” The humor is dry and self-deprecating. Quade’s claim that Ordinary Spaceman is the highest rank, with better pay and closer retirement, undercuts Gavin’s authority. Yet Gavin’s caution proves warranted when Quade, delirious, insists that “aliens can’t be hostile” and jogs toward the herd. The dialogue becomes fragmented as the crew gets drunk on wine from their suits—a detail that adds a layer of unreliability. The line “We were too tired, too numb, too drunk” is delivered flatly, without apology. The narrative voice remains controlled even as the characters lose control, creating a tension between the captain’s deliberate tone and the crew’s deteriorating state.

Pacing Through Physical and Temporal Disorientation

The story’s pacing is uneven, mirroring the characters’ disorientation. Early scenes are static, confined to the ship’s interior, with long stretches of argument. Once outside, the action becomes jerky and sensory-driven. The crew moves “sluggishly” to the tempo of Pomp and Circumstance, and time seems to stretch: “a wisp of time” feels both brief and endless. The discovery of Quade’s body—frostbitten yet heat-prostrated—is handled with grim humor: the Quartermaster “hiccuped” before delivering the diagnosis. The final confrontation with the alien lizard is abrupt; Quade sits up, declares “Ethnic impossibility,” and runs. The story ends without resolution, leaving the alien’s intentions unknown. This truncated pacing, combined with the drunken, hallucinatory state of the crew, suggests that the narrative itself is a product of distorted perception. The reader is left with the same uncertainty that Gavin faces: what is real, and what is transphasia?

Readers should pay close attention to the story’s sensory details—the taste of chocolate, the sound of music, the feel of a safety line—as these are not mere decoration but the primary means by which the narrative conveys its central theme: the unreliability of perception. The dialogue, too, rewards careful reading: every claim about transphasia or alien behavior is undercut by the characters’ own actions. The story is best approached as a puzzle in which the evidence is always suspect.

Some stories linger because they capture how unmoored we feel when certainty slips. That crew’s shared confusion in The Spicy Sound of Success always reminds me of the quieter ache in The Connoisseur — Background and Themes — how even a familiar pleasure can turn strange when we look too closely. I first read both years ago, and they’ve stayed with me like old friends. Odd, the company we keep.

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