The God-Plllnk — Context and Discussion

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Bixby, Jerome, 1923-1998, Bruno [Illustrator] Project Gutenberg 2016 Not confirmed
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Jerome Bixby's 1963 story uses the alien perspective of octopoidal beings on Phobos awaiting a 'God' that is actually a human spacecraft. The narrative shifts between reverent anticipation and mundane irritation from parasitic plllnk, creating a tonal contrast that undercuts the solemn setup.
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Grg was a Fsgh, which is the equivalent of High Priest, Yrl was a Ffssgghh, or Much Higher Priest. The best wishes of their people had gone with them on their tremendous mission.

Now, at the place, they trembled in every tentacle as they peered upward. The rust-red orb of Mars rode the black horizon.

Mars was, as Grg and Yrl had learned from their Elders and now taught their Youngers, the stern Seeing-All Eye of It Who Was the Universe.

From that great Eye, a day ago, had sprung a shining Messenger, an Emissary, a God that must be coming on a purposeful visit.

It had been detected at the half-way point of its trip. But there could be no doubt regarding its origin, its nature, its destination--

For, in the matter of form, the God was a close replica of Grg and Yrl--of all the creatures of their race! It was octopidal, with sinewy double tentacles, and a thinking trunk, and a reproduction pouch!

The only significant difference was that the God gleamed mysteriously, as if its angular, hard-line representation of normal form were cast in shining stone. As it flew it reflected starlight--and the red glow of the Universal Eye behind it--from its sleek surfaces.

Grg and Yrl blinked their own dull-surfaced, astronomically far-sighted, rust-red eyes at each other in supreme excitement and anticipation.

What would the God tell them? What would it reveal? Would it divulge the Cosmic Secret? Would it tell them the place and destiny of their lowly race? Had it come to punish them for not being good enough, for over-reproducing, for worshipping improperly?

From a selfish standpoint, it might even tell them how to get rid of the _plllnk_--a subject of constant prayer.

How smoothly it flew! While Grg and Yrl and their people could bound about with a great agility in Phobos' light gravity, they could not _fly_.

"How wonderful it would be to fly," said Yrl.

"Perhaps," said Grg, "we have been found ready to be taught!"

Then Grg twitched as a _plllnk_ bit him, just under the front left double-tentacle. He combed the light fur there, found the _plllnk_, and shredded it, casting the pieces round-about so that no two of them might combine to form another _plllnk_.

How wonderful it would be also if the God could tell them how to get rid of the itching, crawling, parasitic _plllnk_, whose bite, in sufficient numbers, was often fatal!...

The God began to land.

It shot red flame downward from its mouth, on the underside of its gleaming body. Red flickers and sharp-edged black shadows danced about the two who waited below. They shrank back, fearful that the display might be a disapproving communication--yet they held their ground, knowing they had lived good lives and deserved no condemnation on any score they could imagine.

The God lowered, on its belching tongue of flame--the flame that seemed a tiny part, a sliver, of the Universal Eye that Watched.

Strange marks were on the side of the God's body. They were: 1st MARS EXPEDITION--U. S. SPACE FORCE--PLANET-TO-SATELLITE CREWBOAT NO. 2.

The last few moments of the God's descent were quite rapid. Simultaneously, the darting red flames seemed to lessen in intensity and length. Then, at the second of impact, they brightened again to previous power--but too late. The impact was hard.

Grg and Yrl gasped as one of the God's double-tentacles buckled, crumpled, with a glinting of shiny-hard material. The flames stopped.

The God, unable to remain erect with its injury, slowly toppled. Its body thudded silently, stirring pumice dust. It was motionless.

Grg and Yrl stared at each other.

Was the God fatally injured? Dying? Dead? (For a broken tentacle meant that fluids would seep out, and soon the dry-death would occur.)

It braced two sets of tentacles against the ground, as if trying to push itself erect. The effort was not successful. Again it was motionless. The two double-tentacles remained outstretched, however--and they pointed at the shadows where Grg and Yrl waited and watched.

Grg and Yrl sighed in relief.

The God had assumed conversation-position.

It must have healed its broken tentacle--truly a God! Soon it would be as good as new; for otherwise, agony would forbid conversation.

It was ready to address them. Now.

This was the greatest moment of Grg's and Yrl's lives.

They waited for the God to speak.

A long time passed. The God remained motionless, though in conversation-position, and silent. A _very_ long time passed.

Then a tiny hole appeared in the God's side. It grew larger--larger--and then it stopped growing larger.

Something appeared at the hole. It paused, then dropped to the surface of Phobos, where it began to crawl about.

Jerome Bixby's 1963 story opens with two alien priests, Grg and Yrl, awaiting the landing of a 'God' on Phobos, the moon of Mars. The narrative immediately establishes a dual focus: the grandeur of the approaching deity and the mundane irritation of the parasitic plllnk that bites the priests. This juxtaposition of the cosmic and the trivial sets the tone for a story that balances reverence with irony.

The aliens are described as octopidal, with double tentacles and a reproduction pouch, and they move by flowing, creeping, and oozing across the cold-crusted sand. Their language includes terms like Fsgh and Ffssgghh for priestly ranks, and they view Mars as the 'Seeing-All Eye' of the universe. The God is a close replica of their form, but gleaming and angular, hinting at a mechanical origin.

Voice and Perspective

The story is told from the limited third-person perspective of Grg and Yrl, filtering all events through their alien understanding. Their dialogue and thoughts are rendered in a formal, reverent tone when discussing the God: 'What would the God tell them? What would it reveal?' Yet this solemnity is repeatedly punctured by physical annoyances, such as when Grg twitches as a plllnk bites him and he 'shredded it, casting the pieces round-about so that no two of them might combine.'

The narrative voice maintains a straight-faced delivery of the aliens' beliefs, never winking at the reader. This creates a tension between the reader's likely recognition of the God as a human spacecraft and the characters' genuine awe. The effect is a dry, observational humor that arises from the gap between perception and reality.

Pacing Through Contrast

Bixby controls pace by alternating between stretches of exposition and bursts of action. The opening paragraphs are slow, dwelling on the setting and the priests' anticipation. Then, the plllnk interruption injects a quick, physical moment. Later, the landing sequence accelerates with short sentences: 'It was coming down now. Fast.'

The story's word count of 4,423 allows for a compact structure. The pacing mirrors the aliens' own experience: long periods of waiting punctuated by sudden events. The plllnk serves as a recurring motif that breaks tension, reminding readers of the physical reality beneath the spiritual drama.

Recurring Details and Their Function

The plllnk appears multiple times, each instance reinforcing the aliens' vulnerability and the limits of their knowledge. They pray for relief from the plllnk, yet their only solution is manual removal. The detail that they must shred the plllnk 'so that no two of them might combine to form another' suggests a biological threat that mirrors their own reproductive concerns.

Another recurring element is the description of the God's form as a 'close replica' of the aliens, but made of 'shining stone.' This physical detail is the story's central irony: the God is a machine built by humans, who likely modeled it after the native life. The repetition of this description underscores the misrecognition at the heart of the plot.

Readers may find it useful to track how Bixby uses the aliens' own terminology and beliefs to build a coherent worldview, then undercuts it with physical details. The story rewards attention to the gap between what the characters think is happening and what the reader can infer. The plllnk, in particular, serves as a barometer of tension and a reminder that even the most profound encounter is grounded in bodily experience.

Years ago, I shelved Bixby’s octopoids waiting for their god, and felt that peculiar ache of reverence for something vast and uncomprehended. It’s the same quiet hum I find in World in a Bottle — Reading Companion, where a contained cosmos breathes softly against its glass. Both trust their smallness, and let the enormity simply be.

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