A Toothache on Zenob — Reading Notes

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Emshwiller, Ed, 1925-1990 [Illustrator], Ellanby, Boyd Project Gutenberg 2019 Not confirmed
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Words 8,989
Reading time 40 min
Text sections 1

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In a story where a toothache on the planet Zenob leads to the discovery of an alien signal, the narrative intertwines physical pain with cultural crisis, contrasting inward-looking Zuni attitudes with outward-looking space exploration.
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Cave had been the chief place for the ceremonies of those living in Lahzen area for so many thousands of years, that even the historians did not know of a time when it was not in use. It was so old, some heretics said, that it had outlived its usefulness, and was not even a safe place to be in.

The stars were fading, and the northern sky was paling when the chanting stopped in Cave below. People filed out silently, extinguishing their candles as they reached the opening, and last of all came the Healer.

"Bidagha!" Pehn called softly. "Up here!"

The tall figure paused, then ran lightly up the steps out in the sloping hill.

"Has something happened?"

"Hurry. My copter is waiting back there, and I'll take you to signal dome. Then I'll have to go home. If I'm not there for breakfast, my father will begin another lecture on depravity of youth."

Bidagha's eyes twinkled. "Premier Karn _is_ pretty conscious of his responsibilities to nation, Pehn, but perhaps eighteen years ought to be more respectful of fifty. I am nearly latter myself, you know. But what has happened?"

Pehn raised his arm and pointed towards Weaver. "We're getting signals. We think maybe they come from some planet of Topaz."

Bidagha clasped his strong hands on his breast. His black hair, curling over a high, olive forehead, was held in place by the narrow green band of his calling. Under his little mustache his mouth was firm and serene, and his gray eyes were exalted as he stared at the fading yellow star.

The bluish sun of Zenob had risen by the time Pehn got home. He sat through the family breakfast with his parents and his sister, thankful that his night's absence had apparently not been noticed.

Pehn's father, old Premier Karn, represented, the old man liked to think, the ideal of Zenobian maturity. The placidity of his mind was reflected in the soft roundness of his unlined face, and his full lips curved at the corners in perpetual contentment. Like most of his countrymen, he had never felt any conflict between his own impulses and the customs of his society, and never in his life had he needed the ministrations of a Healer.

In his usual benevolent mood this morning, Premier Karn entertained his family with his meditations on his favorite theme, the glories of Zenob's history and the perfection of her knowledge. They listened to his remarks in patient silence. As he sipped at his last cup of fragrant _akhlai_, he tried to make a kindly remark to his son.

"And what progress is your institute making towards practical atomic power, Pehn? Foundations of this work were laid down more than two hundred years ago, and government would be glad to have demonstration at any time."

"We're little uncertain, sir, when that will be. We want to be sure, before our first trial, that we have checked against even vaguest possibility of starting widespread chain reaction."

The Premier frowned, set down his cup, and touched his napkin to his lips. "But how could this occur?"

"It is not at all likely. But if, for example, as has been suggested, crust of our planet should contain large quantities of some heavy element with properties we don't know about, something related to 235 or 238 for instance, and easily fissionable, our very first trial might prove disastrous."

"Nonsense, nonsense!" said the Premier. "Complete chemistry of our planet was worked out and tabulated more than three hundred years ago. There were great chemists in those days, and since then no further research has ever been necessary. There could not possibly be any elements which we don't know about. It is not seemly for you young men to be questioning work of great geniuses of past."

Pehn's sister, Soma, had been silent, as befitted a woman. Now she said, "Father, I have been told that long time ago, Sarkar Talat, after life spent in philosophical research, gave Warning to government--"

The story opens with Pehn Karn, an ugly young man by his race's standards, suffering from a toothache that has plagued him for six months. While his friend Nautunal scans space for signals, Pehn notices a pattern in the noise: a series of dots representing simple addition, suggesting an intelligent sender. This discovery sets off a conflict between the need to respond and the cultural isolationism of Zenob, as Pehn's family pressures him to undergo a traditional healing ceremony rather than pursue the alien contact.

A Toothache as a Plot Device

The toothache is not merely a physical ailment but a narrative catalyst. Pehn's pain is described as making his face "lopsided," and he has hidden it for months. The ache distracts him during the signal detection, yet it also sharpens his perception. When Nautunal dismisses the pattern as noise, Pehn insists, "Can't you see? Somebody is trying to show us they know how to add." The toothache thus becomes a metaphor for a deeper societal ache—the reluctance to engage with the unknown. The story uses this personal discomfort to mirror the broader tension between tradition and progress.

Cultural Contrasts: Zenob vs. Earth

The excerpts introduce a parallel Earth narrative where Joe and a colleague discuss the Zuni people, who "wouldn't bother to listen to a message from outer space, much less reply." This contrasts with the Zenobians, who are actively receiving signals but are divided on how to respond. The Earth characters note that the Zuni have high intelligence scores but an "outward-looking" culture is needed for space communication. This juxtaposition suggests that the story is less about aliens than about cultural attitudes toward exploration. The Zenobian society, with its "Ceremony" and "Healer" Bidagha, mirrors the inward-looking tendencies described on Earth.

The Ceremony and the Knife

Pehn's family insists on the traditional Ceremony to cure his toothache, even as the alien signal grows urgent. Bidagha, the Healer, admits that "it may be that we should not rely on ritual alone, and that it would be wiser to use knife." This introduces a conflict between ritual and practical medicine, paralleling the choice between isolation and contact. The Cave where the ceremony takes place is described with ancient stones and a stream, emphasizing tradition. Yet the story leaves unresolved whether ritual or surgery will prevail, and whether the alien message will be answered. The excerpts cut off before the ceremony concludes, leaving the outcome uncertain.

Readers should note that the excerpts do not reveal the resolution of either the toothache or the alien contact. The story balances personal and societal crises, using the toothache as a focal point for exploring themes of tradition, pain, and the courage to reach out. Pay attention to how the physical description of Pehn's suffering mirrors the cultural discomfort of his world.

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